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06-May-2020 Wednesday
Corrected most of the errors and rewrote the text. Well, now it will be at least more or less intelligible, but that’s up to you to judge

03-May-2020 Sunday
Hello guys, in short I wrote a short story, but only 1 chapter, please rate it honestly (and yes, I’m 13, so don’t judge too harshly)


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