Hello~ please rate the art and can anyone give me some criticism?

 
Hello~ please rate the art and can anyone give me some criticism? - Art, Критика, First post, Longpost
Hello~ please rate the art and can anyone give me some criticism? - Art, Критика, First post, Longpost
Hello~ please rate the art and can anyone give me some criticism? - Art, Критика, First post, Longpost
Hello~ please rate the art and can anyone give me some criticism? - Art, Критика, First post, Longpost


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