Friends, a newbie needs help with art. What's wrong? What are the shortcomings/errors? Criticism please

 
Friends, a newbie needs help with art. What's wrong? What are the shortcomings/errors? Criticism please - My, Art, Storyboard, Concept Art, Computer graphics, Pencil drawing, Drawing, Longpost
Friends, a newbie needs help with art. What's wrong? What are the shortcomings/errors? Criticism please - My, Art, Storyboard, Concept Art, Computer graphics, Pencil drawing, Drawing, Longpost


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